March 07, 2016

Fantastic Voyage: Flash Animatic Test #3


  1. Okay - I think you need to reconsider your typeface for the info sections; it's hard to read, and I think you'd get that feedback at the pitch. I also think the 'wobbly wobbly' effect is too conspicuous and taking too long to transition the text. Just take a look at some alternate typefaces that are simpler on the eye and think about the flow of their transitioning. Really good to see you powering on, Becky - the use and introduction of text is always a real challenge, so just take another look :)