October 21, 2015

Invisible Cities: Diomira Exterior Low Angle

1 comment:

  1. Hi Becky, I wonder if you might want to revisit the grey of the cobble stones and fountain surround, as it seems a bit dead in comparison with all the translucency and glimmer of everything else. If you imagine that those cobble stones are wet (i.e. reflective) you could introduce colour from the sky and also light picking out the edges of each cobble stone - I think you need to bring this element in line with the hues of the rest of the composition.